Monday, January 4, 2010 | 7:59 PM | with 12 rabbits | add more :3
Because of the curiosity and admiration on how to make a Haiku*, I decided to ask WINDOWLAD how to make one(because his blog is full of 'em ^_^). And now..viola!! Hre's my first attempt in doing one:
Summer Smile
Sky with all its hues
Spreads summer scent in the air
O’er a breath of smile.
(already edited)
How is it? I really really need your advices, criticisms and tips on it since it's my first time making a haiku. Hope you would help me :3
Anyway, I dunno if my haiku really has sense in some ways I find it difficult since I am used to have rhymes in making poems. Well, somehow, the theme of it was already on summer though it is still few months from now. Haha. You can say that I want summer to come already coz that means another bunch of vacation~! Yeeeh..haha..:D
*Haiku (based from WINDOWLAD)-it's a Japanese's shortest poem consisting only 17 syllables which are divided into three lines... the first and third line has 5 syllables while the second has 7... so that's it... nature is often the various subjects of a good haiku..
BAKA USAGI(which can be translated as "stupid rabbit")
I got it from watching 2 animes which I really enjoyed: pandora hearts and junjou romantica.
In the magical world of pandora hearts, one of the main character is Alice which transforms into a black rabbit. She got the nickname from Gilbert Nightray whose always having petty fights with her.(~ ^ O ^)~?
In junjou romantica, Akihiko Usami's nickname is "Usagi-san" and when he makes fun of Misaki of doing ecchi stuffs with him, Misaki calls him "baka usagi-san". I always love those scenes where misaki blushes and fights over his feelings and totally denying it.
I personally rabbitbecause they are cute and all. And t's okay for me to be called an idiot. In manga and anime, being an idiot is a cool and cute thing since you can start at the beginning being weak then slowly moving forward and becoming who you want to be.
I like to admit i'm an idiot--in dealing with things i don't know. I guess it's okay to be an idiot as long as you know who you are and you know what's your purpose in life.
Why AYU?
AYU
I got it from the name of my favorite character in an anime which taught me the bitter and most hurtful side of love--honey and clover. Her whole name is Ayumi Yamada.
A third-year art student, age 21 at the start of the series, specializing in ceramic arts. She is well-known by other students for her pottery and her nicknameTetsujin "Iron-lady" for running 6 km to school every morning to help her dog lose weight. She is depicted as a beautiful young woman, who catches the attention of her male friends and coworkers. Yamada is deeply in love with Mayama, but he does not return her feelings and repeatedly encourages her to find someone else. Later in the series, she is angered by Mayama's sudden protectiveness when he tries to shield her from his former boss, Nomiya. Yamada is close friends with Hagu, who addresses her by first name. At the end of the series, Yamada continues as a graduate student in art, while making pottery for Harada Design.(-x)
While I was watching the anime, I could relate myself to herthat's why I started adapting her nickname "ayu" as my pen name.
My First Haiku◕‿◕
Monday, January 4, 2010 | 7:59 PM | with 12 rabbits | add more :3
Because of the curiosity and admiration on how to make a Haiku*, I decided to ask WINDOWLAD how to make one(because his blog is full of 'em ^_^). And now..viola!! Hre's my first attempt in doing one:
Summer Smile
Sky with all its hues
Spreads summer scent in the air
O’er a breath of smile.
(already edited)
How is it? I really really need your advices, criticisms and tips on it since it's my first time making a haiku. Hope you would help me :3
Anyway, I dunno if my haiku really has sense in some ways I find it difficult since I am used to have rhymes in making poems. Well, somehow, the theme of it was already on summer though it is still few months from now. Haha. You can say that I want summer to come already coz that means another bunch of vacation~! Yeeeh..haha..:D
*Haiku (based from WINDOWLAD)-it's a Japanese's shortest poem consisting only 17 syllables which are divided into three lines... the first and third line has 5 syllables while the second has 7... so that's it... nature is often the various subjects of a good haiku..
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The Clover Searcher
I'm Ayu. nineteen years old. a proud to be Filipina. student of University of the East-Caloocan, taking up Financial Management. I art, domo-kun, rilakkuma, literature, photography, Jpop, Jculture, anime, manga, cosplay and Asian dramas.