My First Haiku◕‿◕
Monday, January 4, 2010 | 7:59 PM | with 12 rabbits | add more :3
Because of the curiosity and admiration on how to make a Haiku*, I decided to ask WINDOWLAD how to make one(because his blog is full of 'em ^_^). And now..viola!! Hre's my first attempt in doing one:
Sky with all its hues
Spreads summer scent in the air
O’er a breath of smile.
(already edited)How is it? I really really need your advices, criticisms and tips on it since it's my first time making a haiku. Hope you would help me :3
Anyway, I dunno if my haiku really has sense in some ways I find it difficult since I am used to have rhymes in making poems. Well, somehow, the theme of it was already on summer though it is still few months from now. Haha. You can say that I want summer to come already coz that means another bunch of vacation~! Yeeeh..haha..:D
*Haiku (based from WINDOWLAD)-it's a Japanese's shortest poem consisting only 17 syllables which are divided into three lines... the first and third line has 5 syllables while the second has 7... so that's it... nature is often the various subjects of a good haiku..